Peer Review Sammi: Your essay is off to a really good start. However, the first thing I noticed about your paper was that the first sentence seemed to be leading the reader in the opposite direction of where your stance is. I would recommend just rewording that to make your argument clear right off the bat. Another thing I noticed was that for your paragraph about online shopping, it seems that you’re not using much of your own ideas and…
Interview with a grown-up
I am choosing to use my third, mystery source as Meet the Life Hackers by Clive Thompson. I found this article using the link and sources provided by my professor but I chose to click on this one because it related back to something we had read in Richard Restak’s, Attention Deficit: The Brain Syndrome of Our Era, when he talked about life hacks. This essay is about how to find the perfect middle ground between distractions from technology that…
